I really liked your elevator pitch, I think you included the right amount of information to hook the listener in the beginning, leaving them wanting more and having more questions. You do look business professional, which is always good for an elevator pitch. I would say that we had 90 seconds for the assignment, so maybe go the full length of the time allowed next time but overall great job!
I think you did a great job at your elevator pitch. You are standing in your pitch and seemed very engaged and passionate about your idea about a breathalyzer phone case. You avoided talking about yourself and instead just focus on why a phone case breathalyzer was a good solution to solving the drinking and driving problem. Overall, I think that your idea was great and you were very professional in your pitch.
Hey, you pitch was clear and focused you are a very eloquent speaker, you gave a good amount of background information that I felt informed about what you were talking about. I know that I should carry one because it would come in handy in many different situations but I feel like you should make an app that goes a long with it so the person can have maybe an Uber ordered for them and they are less likely to drunk drive.
Hi Guiliana,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your elevator pitch, I think you included the right amount of information to hook the listener in the beginning, leaving them wanting more and having more questions. You do look business professional, which is always good for an elevator pitch. I would say that we had 90 seconds for the assignment, so maybe go the full length of the time allowed next time but overall great job!
-Kayla
Hi Guiliana,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job at your elevator pitch. You are standing in your pitch and seemed very engaged and passionate about your idea about a breathalyzer phone case. You avoided talking about yourself and instead just focus on why a phone case breathalyzer was a good solution to solving the drinking and driving problem. Overall, I think that your idea was great and you were very professional in your pitch.
Hey, you pitch was clear and focused you are a very eloquent speaker, you gave a good amount of background information that I felt informed about what you were talking about. I know that I should carry one because it would come in handy in many different situations but I feel like you should make an app that goes a long with it so the person can have maybe an Uber ordered for them and they are less likely to drunk drive.
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